samthenthulus neblustarvegakr to Sammy A.
Textbooks made out of five endangered
Sequoias and emo tartans run down
Your skin
Crossroads and tupac danced
Rhythmandblues: a cat stevens mirrored life
Techobopblondeblueeyedboy
In shades of black and grey
Tempered by flirty rosesaltpurple
Jousted and battled as the 10th level Jedi
With a green light saber you claimed was your
Alter ego
And
Sicktightmadfresh
Is all you really needed to say.
well at least to make me smile.
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Unorthodox for sure.
But I loved it anyhow. Especially how you combined the words. Sometimes when people do that, they seem to do it just for style and it doesn't actually have a meaning. Yours wasn't like that though...I actually felt it. Great job.